I will likely use Bolfing's structure, starting with an abstract, an introduction to basic ideas and information, and progression through the topic. Many of the flaws I've noticed in Bolfing's work are some that I know I'm prone to making myself. Seeing them in someone else's document reminded me to stay focused, state my point clearly, and make sure my idea doesn't get lost elsewhere. Likewise, I need to focus my idea on a more coherent topic. Since both of our arguments are based in cultural anthropology, finding resources to clearly support my idea will be very important to avoid concluding what I want instead of what is true. I also want to include pictures and diagrams to better illustrate my point. Finally, it is useful to see that it is possible to finish a thesis that has